For more than two decades he has petitioned the governor
and received a drawerful of legal forms and denials for his
trouble. The Reverend Promise Y. Lee, Th.M., pastor and founder
of the Relevant Word Christian Cultural Center in Colorado
Springs, spent the formative years of his adolescence in general
population at one of Colorado's maximum security prisons.
Pardoned: A Judicial Memoir is a true story of a 15-year old
convicted of second-degree murder and left to fend for himself
among hardened criminals and predators within America's penal
system. Written by my friend, Promise Lee, Pardoned is in
development as an independent film project, and I’ve helped out
with some early draft scripting.
The book is less than 200 pages but they are 200 very dense pages spanning a very complex lifetime. Additionally, I was hampered by my intimate knowledge of and respect for the person I was writing, which actually made the writing more difficult. Promise is not a verbose person. He is a contemplative and deeply spiritual person. Our afternoons can often resolve into silence as he kind of Zens out. This used to make me very nervous, but as I grew to know him, I realized he wasn’t a guy who needed to fill every moment with idle chatter. So when those gaps came, I just let ‘em come. Most people travel around with the radio blaring or talking on the pone. I blew a fuse in my car stereo maybe five years ago and keep forgetting to get it fixed. I use drive time to take out the mental trash, to sort through the debris in my head. I cherish quiet like it was gold bullion. Promise is much the same way.
It would be easier to portray him with fast-talking clever dialogue, but that’s not who he is. In the book, he’s talking throughout because he is telling his story. You can only do but so much of that in film, so I was confronted with having to write complexity into a character who rarely spoke, and who was certainly not going to examine that complexity in any way meaningful to the audience.
The Glamorous Life:: ATF gang sweeps.
A Dozen Stories
There are, maybe, two dozen stories in the book. A film gives
you time to tell one. I’m not sure Promise understood this
initially, as his thinking seemed to be, “How hard can this be?
The book's only 200 pages.” Average screenplay needs to be under
120 pages, so, just lop off 80 pages and type it up. He didn’t
literally say that, but that’s the initial picture. The problem
is, the writing in the book is so dense that each page could be
five or even ten pages of screenplay. The book will be much
richer and much more in-depth than any 90-minute film could
possibly do justice to.
Additionally, the book spends most of its pages dealing with Promise’s life in prison. This was a fork in the road in terms of what we individually thought the movie was about. I didn’t want to write a prison film. I think audiences have seen so much of that that, unless we have space aliens bust him out, I’m not sure we could write something that would justify focusing on his prison experience that would be commercially viable.
I thought the movie should be about shattered expectations, including those of the audience. The audience will expect Promise to emerge from prison a new man, having found Jesus or Allah or Bugs Bunny in the joint, now he’s out and changed for the better. This is the fairy tale we’ve been fed all our lives, why we call these places “rehabilitation facilities.” They’re not. They are places of punishment. They destroy the mind and corrupt the soul. As bad as Promise was before prison, he emerged from that experience exponentially more dangerous.
If I had my way, I’d skip prison entirely, breaking the second act with Promise on a bus after his parole, which skips almost half the narrative in the book. His post-incarceration disconnect from humanity, society and even reality is a tragic and heartbreaking story, and the dynamics of his ultimate turnaround—wherein the former dope dealer ends up being a kind of Christian Batman, literally confronting very dangerous drug dealers and chasing them out of his neighborhood—is fascinating.
Home At Last:: Author Promise Lee and daughter Candice.
The Days After Tomorrow
Lee ends up being cited by Vice President Al Gore for his
amazing community service and building a Christian cultural
center right in the heart of those former badlands. But one
success continues to elude him: his ongoing petition for an
official pardon for his conviction. His was a reckless,
thoughtless and heinous act which took place under threat and in
the context of other criminal activity. Justified or not, most
any other 15-year old would have been given a second chance at
life. Had Lee gone to trial, he would at the very least have
been afforded a more complete airing of the details of those
complex events. Rather than the conventional urban legend that
Lee simply killed a white boy for no apparent reason, a trial
would have, at minimum, underscored that it was Lee who was the
boy, the victim an adult who was threatening him.
Belying all the subsequent good Lee has done for the community is his continued efforts to see that record corrected.
Christopher J. Priest
17 October 2011
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